My Faded Melody Still Plays For You

Very well-constructed piece. You write with detailed and specific imagery that is right on. I know I haven't been around in a while but I'm thinking of coming back to writing even though my stay here was brief as it was before. Nice to see you're still writing.

Love the images you've given - -teardrop of ink- -words on my lips-

-Just to show you the side of me, that's been torn apart.- feels like.. the writer, really wants-needs to other to feel and see that
-torn apart- as if desperate.

i loved the message in the end.
Just amplifies the whole poem.

very true.
loved it n_n
5/5

The emotion you put into that was phenominal, I liked how you devoted it to a group of lost lovers... I also really liked the little piece of personification (If thats the right word) you put into it: the painting, brush, paint ect.

another great one

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Great poem i wouldnt change anything its got a kind of rythm that flows through it perfectly keep up the good work

Brilliant poem, your words flowed so freely, nothing bad to say about it well done and keep it up
Jussie