Comments : The Magician ( Clerihew)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Lmao...this cracks me up. I love this, when i read the instructions for this style i thought it would be kinda difficult to fit a humourous verse in such a small space, but you make this look so effortless and easy, while managing to paint such vivid imagery and create a perfect flow at the same time..Beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by fearose

    Teehee! This made me smile! Toasted bunny... yumm.... :]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Lol
    I love this... it truly made me smile. Great poem, and really excellent job with this form (I tried to write this, but it didn't work lol)

  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Great work. You took such a juvenile scheme and used it maturely without losing the fun aspect.
    {5/5}
    [PygmyPuff]

  • 15 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Lol...How did I not ever read this one?

    Funny as always my dear Tim.

  • 15 years ago

    by Timothy

    Hmmm I kinda expected better from you, but mildly amusing. I see you are in right now, yet havent wrote a new poem in almost a year??? whats up?

  • 15 years ago

    by Timothy

    My latest poem as you and Holly Armer listed in it