Speed Kills (acrostic)

by David   Nov 29, 2007


Dedicated to my Friend

Speeding kills
People young and old
Everlasting regret and sorrow
Everyone is still told
Drink and drive, you bloody idiot

Kind words are irrelevant
Innocent passengers die
Life ends in an instant, C R A S H
Loving parents and friends left to
Sob and try, just try to prevent it happening again. . .

So please don't drink and drive or drive at excessive speeds. Yeah it might be ok 99% of the time, but just think of that 1%. That 1%, their lives, !ARE! worth more than the risk of speeding. And why speed? To save a few measly minutes?? Your life might end and you will be forever late.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Good write and a great message. as a paramedic i can say that one percent does happen. all the best wishes ben thompson

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    First of all, I'd like to say that I hope this isn't written from personal experience.. it seems that way though> If it is, I'm terribly sorry for your loss.
    Secondly, you haven't posted on here in a long time, I hope you do start again soon, lots of people miss it.
    Thirdly, this is an excellent piece. Simple, yet exploding with emotion. The flow is good and you put a meaningful message and lesson in this as well as telling a story too.
    Well done, David.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really good and true poem. especially about leaving friends behind. 5/5

    im glad that your writing again, i have missed your poems a lot.

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    I really liked it and its very true specially the bit bout leaving friends behind and all that kinda stuff

    Hannah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hey!!!!
    David, how nice to see you posting again!
    You are very right...we should all leave the bottle alone when we have to drive. I know from another friend in Oz punishments are severe when you get cought!
    Your poem is beautiful, by the way.

    Talk to you soon, my dear friend

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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