I'm Blue

by firexdancer   Dec 14, 2007


A little gasp escapes my lips
as the green-yellow grass touches my fingertips
my tongue engulfed in what seems violet fire
how could it be possible for me to rise any higher?

Your earthy smell, like crystal water
the ripple that's my heart gets hotter
my skin aflame, with memories
cooled off by the shade of forgiving trees.

A meadow of your mind, I'm in
the breeze is every touch of your skin
and though I stumble, I still run
for birds forever flock to the sun.

The rays of light carrying me
shimmering with happiness for I'm finally free
but even perfection has it's faults
my walls collapse with a shuddering halt.

I'm broken, hitting the cold concrete
a violent shade of azure is defeat
these tears rolling down my face now blue
as I stand alone, for there was never you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Another great poem of yours... It's so beautifully written.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    Very well written paints a beautiful picture in the mind keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is really good, keep writing, and i'll keep reading... please look at some of my stuff and tell me what you think.

  • 16 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    Love the imagery dear.

    :]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    Oh wow this was powerful and well writen, i really like this alot. Very emotional but it got to the point and a twist at the end becasue honestly i thought it would be another dying love story but it wasnt it was because that person was really never there. amazing. :]

    keep up the good work. keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

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