Comments : Razor Kissed

  • 16 years ago

    by Whitney

    Dang! That was an amazing write filled with so much emotion. The words flowed beautifully and fit so well together. Great Job
    ~*Whit*~

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle

    Wow.. this is amazing.. It says exactly what I cant say, but think.. really good.. you write beautifully

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Wow all your poems are so amzing they leave meh speechless lolz i love it ! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I think it was really cool how you made a good poem with such short stanzas. I think the bad thing about those short lines though, is you really have to watch your flow. You seem to have three matching lines in a stanza and then have one that's out of place.
    However, I really liked the end of the poem, and the idea of a "Razor's Kiss" was an excellent metaphor. I also liked your imagery, such as in the line, "Mascara runs, Black rivers flow"
    Overall nice poem. =]
    ~Ash

  • 16 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Very well written. Good job painting a picture. You remind of me because we both got the ability to paint pictures through our poetry. There are not many poets on here who are worthy of me taking a glance at but your definetely one of them. I have been on here for awhile I think since 2005 or 2004. Go and take a look at my favorites and you will find your name up there next to the other very few.

  • 16 years ago

    by NicoleBaby101

    Oh my god! that is so good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Wow just wow amazing and so descriptive even tho there were few words
    Terrfic!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Wow another amazing poem

  • 15 years ago

    by LiveLoveLearnDie

    Filled with a lot of emotion, you came across very strong with so few words, i can only say AMazINg wORk!

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    Awesomely put. It shows a truer side of life.

  • 15 years ago

    by BreakMyWingsAndRun

    Oo! dude this is absolutly awsumeee! deff a 5/5! greatttt job :)

  • 15 years ago

    by kida

    I like it i like it i like it i like it..... this is too awsome

  • I LIKE it lol oh and by the way thanks for being there for me when i needed u the most ILY Caleb Hammett AKA UR BFF

  • 13 years ago

    by Skitzo11609

    My sisiter is 13 yrs old and she is a cutter. i find her constantly coming into my room telling me how cold she is... i understand your pain