Wow, this poem totally took my breathe away. It was so good, but sad. I like readin poems like this cause it makes me think of all the bastard dads out there that do this to their little girls. Great poem!

5/5<---wish I could give it more

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Wow, this poem totally took my breathe away. It was so good, but sad. I like readin poems like this cause it makes me think of all the bastard dads out there that do this to their little girls. Great poem!

5/5<---wish I could give it more

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Wow, this poem totally took my breathe away. It was so good, but sad. I like readin poems like this cause it makes me think of all the bastard dads out there that do this to their little girls. Great poem!

5/5<---wish I could give it more

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

This peom was well spoken out i could picture it happening its really sad and very dark, i dont understand how someone could do that to their own child you know thats so messed up. :| i dont get it sometimes theres so many weirdos out there that like to do that and dont realized whats happening. but anyways amazing job.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Gosh!!! very touchy... its marvelous and fantastic!! 5/5

Wow.
this was a very touching and sad poem.
i could imagine the whole thing in my head.
the word choice was good
and i love how it was ended
5/5

This is a wonderfully written poem. the wording was wonderful. the only little mistakes i could see were "but she coulcould cry" & "daddy�¢??s home" where you need to take out the "?¢??". other than that this is a wonderful poem. 5/5

Kalee

I loved the mysteriousness in this poem it was wonderful and you truly did a good job with this one. The vacab was good but there were a few places that I thought the wrong word was used for example: first stanza line 5 the word would I think should be used but im not sure on what you were trying to say
4/5
kaila