Hi Valentine Remeber Me

by Zetzue   Dec 18, 2007


This Valentine's Day

No Memories To Save

The Only Flowers For You

Will Be On Your Grave

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jaime

    I'm actually rather surprised that you are so young. I thought this was a really sad poem, and I think you chose your words nicely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Letty

    This is very good for a ten year old; although it could use a little more depth. You have the rhyming scheme down packed, but you need to work on punctuation, capitalization and a few other things. There is one thing that I would like to point out to you right now. You should not have capitalized every word in your poem, but I still have to say the you did a good job. It was short and straight to the point. Why don't you take this poem and work on lengthening it, so that there is more meaning. Again I say good job.

    Letty

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    Ah, that was bloody good. Short and sweet. Keep writing, yeah?