Comments : Breathless

  • 16 years ago

    by YoungMynd

    Very pretty!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    I like it...the syle is a little different then what im used to but all in a all a very good poem. i can certinly relate....as i am in love myself. but yes good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Wow that was amazing....id use big words in mi poems but im not that smart lmao...but this was really good keep up the good work....& thanks for the comment on mi poem....
    5/5

    -SAM

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Cute poem. :]

    i feel this way about someone too.
    only. .they moved away last year. :[
    but i manage. .

    5/5. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Aww this poem was very sweet
    u really a get a picture about how u feel about this person
    good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shotput Girl

    This poem was written very well. good job!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    Well i would say that the style of writing could do with a little improvement.. its like uve mixed two styles together... one sounds somewhat like rap ...the other reads like a song.. although its over all a well written piece..it would be better if u made the arrangement a little more cohesive

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This was a very lovely piece. It portrayed the message beautifully and flowed well..

    An enjoyable read.
    well done,
    keep it up.
    --Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Awwwz i rele liike it...its cute!!!! and i can relate to it too!!! lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    This reminds me of myself...Good Job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Ohh ...great imagery and emotions! the feelings u had expressed and those word are truly fantastic! so sweet piece and it was so true 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved it! The way you described what he has that makes you happy just made me smile because I could relate 100% The style was different and I enjoyed it a lot. Well done, I was interested from beginning to end. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    This was so sweet, so amazing. I loved how it was written, and I loved the message behind it. This poem was simply beautiful! The emotions that you portrayed were simply amazing! Keep up the awesome work!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    "Your unmindful flirtation
    Your hypnotizing eyes"
    Easily my favorite lines! It reminds me of the day i met my boyfriend! He was so flirty and his eyes are an amazing shade of green...this part i can really relate to.

    Its a really good poem. the flow was good and word chosen where really powerful and added another element to the poem
    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I don't even know where to begin with this poem. It just hit the spot for me, bought tears to my eyes. I wish that I could express that passion for the person that I'm in love with.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    Breathless piece dedicated to a loved one....You write from your heart which is good...Keep up the good work..

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A wonderful detailed celebration of your love.
    The repetetive statements with its explaination was a unique way to express such a wonderful emotion!!

    Well done 5/5

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Great poem!
    i like the repition and all of the great decriptive words you used :)!
    5/5 deffinately :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany

    Aww, thats too cute :]
    I like it! It's different [in a good way]

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Ken

    I did a extra one for u juss becuz i like how u write. this one is no different from the others i read...5/5*.