Without You

by TwiztidJuggalette   Dec 19, 2007


Is it hard for you to understand,
I don't want anyone but you
You mean the world to me
And for you I'll always remain true

You came into my life last year
It took me by surprise
You showed me how you really cared
And how your not like other guys,

It took some time to trust you
But I eventually took down my walls
You helped me through a lot
And caught my every fall

But now its not the same anymore
Something between us isn't right
I really don't know what happened
Now all we do is fight

You accuse me of things
That I've never even done
And when I hear what you believe
Of course the tears are ready to come

I'm not going to say sorry
Because I did nothing wrong
But I am saying goodbye
Even without you I can be strong.

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  • 15 years ago

    by anurag

    Strong emotions nice one

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very well written... so very emotional...
    the first few stanzas describe how you felt to have some in your life... i liked that part most.. the feeling of being in love is the best feeling...but to loose someone is the hardest...
    very well described...

    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by noha

    Beautiful poem,i like how the feeling come out from your heart to beautiful words,i love the first stanze its my favorait,and flow is good ,keep writting and well done 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CHEMICALcaitlin

    I really like this poem && the emotions in it. I know what it's like to feel like this, only with 3 of my best friends. It's one of those poems that a lot of people can relate to, and those poems are really good. soo...good job, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    I liked it, the situation is very relatable. The rhyme and flow of it works well. My fave part would have to be the last two lines. A suggestion: "It took some time to trust you
    But I eventually took down my walls." When i was reading it, 'took down my walls' came along kinda weird. I think let or something else would flow better. But it's still good the way it is.

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