This is a very sad poem. sorry for ya situation. what sickness you got? oh happy new year.

It's sad, but I like it. :)

Time is precious but you can hav some of mine. you have amazing talent. should b rewarded

Hi Lauren,
My favorite lines are:

An infinite struggle to catch my breath,
Breathing on my shoulder I can feel death.

Don't fear the reaper

Mike

Aah, sad poem, but the end summed it all up perfectly, great job!

This wa sbeautiful yet sad. but filled with emotion on each line. i loved it.

Never knowing whether I'll see tomorrow,
Is there any time left that I can borrow?

i liked those lines the most, a great ending. "Is there any time left I can borrow?"
that's an interesting question. quite creative. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Very, very strong ending.
"Never knowing whether I'll see tomorrow,
Is there any time left that I can borrow? "

I loved the way you ended it with a question!
powerful statement
another amazing write great job!