I Cannot Sleep

by Goran Rahim   Dec 24, 2007


I cannot sleep

I am awake
With the stars and the moon,
I am awake
Because I miss you so much
I cannot sleep,
Wishing to see u soon.

That moon knows
How much I love you
As everyone else is asleep
When I am awake missing you.

I have your picture
In front of me
Except you
Nothing my eyes can see.

I am awake
Missing your sweet lip.
Remembering your smile,
I cannot sleep.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    U r really a fantastic poet...I do admire the way u wrote that poem..it was so simple ,sad but at the same time it was so beautiful...good job...keep it up
    Take care:)..

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Goran,
    this piece was very sweet and short. I loved it as I always love the words spilling from your pen. You truly have a way with words.

    5.5
    Your deserve.
    --Elaine.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    So simply expressed the deepest feelings of heart. Nice flow and well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem :) I feel that way about my guy. It had a good flow for the most part. The word choice was great. It can also be easy to relate to. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow it feels like forever since I've
    read one of your poems Of course
    still one of the greatest poets on here.
    Keep up the great owrk..could you please
    look at my latest 2? Thank you :)
    5/5<3tay

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