This an amazing piece of work!
talent, and emotion! 5/5
keep it up!

Great poem. I love it. 5/5
-vino

Hebe your talent has no bounds , great poem I loved it, keep up the good work my friend
take care
Phil

Ah, destiny. I always believe in that thing :)

Well it was a great poem about that, good job. Well I have a suggestion.. try to use more punctuations. :) well of course it's your choice to do so :)

Anyway another suggestion.

But destiny's not done with you yet(...)
Use an ellipse(sp) or (...) so it creates an atmosphere for the reader :)

I feel that way too like I want to die but I still wonder whats next... great poem

Wow, this really is a sad poem. Almost felt shivers down my spine! Great way of telling where destiny can take you!!

5/5