Comments : Why i never called u my friend

  • 16 years ago

    by Manda

    Hey FakeSmile,

    This poem was rated 4/5. It needed a few more details. In one part you are talking about this friend in past tense, then in comes back to the present. It was good, but somewhat confusing. =] And I liked the part when it says people keep telling you to stop writing but you say, "No."! That's so me. =] Obviously, it's you, too! Well yes, this poem is good. =]

    - Manda

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    I loved this poem.. It shows hhow much u love you friend.. I wish that I could sometime forget what my friend did to me. You see we used to be best friends, almost like sisters, but the she screwed everything up, and even though now were best friends again, I still can't forget the time she made my life hell..

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that's sweet. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • Very well writen you did a good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aiswarya

    Awesome poem..itz so emotional n thnx a ton 4 ur comments on my poem..
    hope u read da rest also!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Awwh, this poem is really sweet :)
    it made me want to call all my friends and tell them i love them
    good job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Very touching :)

  • 16 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Very touching :)