Hmm only i can noticed this poem is u supposed to dedicated this poet to the very special someone..?hehe thats only i can feel..

....but anyway,,, its mixed feelings after i read this poem of urs.. theres a lot of words that really touches my heart.. there a sad piece, love and some lines made me smile coz its a bit sweet and romantic for me.. and i think it really comes from ur heart.. all the lines are well expressed and sounds really interesting.. very impressive keep it up5/5

Beautiful ending, I loved it. I think that there was a bit of emotion lacking in this peice compared to your others that I have read. But still, beautiful. I can feel you fear and it is almost scary for the reader, the mixed emotions are pulling through as you read further into the poem. That is a great thing though.

The first stanza, wow what a way to open a poem. You catch the readers attention with the last line being a question. Definintly made me want to read more and I am glad I did (:

Great poem. 5.5

Amber :]]

Omg i love this poem and ik that feeling!

I'm willing to try this and see
just if we both are meant to be;
But if I give you rope, I know
I'll let you have it all
-- I'll fall.
Will you be there below?

that was my favorit part in the poem...cuz i also kno how that is! 5/5

This poem is amazing.. I know exactly how you feel when you wrote this poem, I am going through the same exact thing right now. You are very talented! :]

I really like this poem.. and what makes it so great is that probably everyone can relate to it.. well I know I can.

"If I let you in my heart,
would you break or fill it?"

I really like those 2 lines.. People are always scared to give someone their heart because they don't know what they will do with it once they get it... Excellent job. I think you pretty summed up all the questions and fears of giving someone everything you have. Nice job. Keep it up ! =)

I really like this alot alot alot very good

I really liked this poem. i can relate to it, not wanting to open up and making urself vulnerable.
comment on mine if u can i'm new :)
btw i support all marriages

You're like a dream come true to me,
but I'm still sorta timid;
If I let you in my heart,
would you break or fill it?
^^^^that was my favourite!
your a great poem writer!
love this poem i kinda related to it!
5/5
xo