Comments : Starting new

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Nice piece. i like it. :]
    the liked the word choice you used too.
    you captured the emotion nicely.
    5/5. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    I'm really starting to like tyour poems, again another beautifully written peace which flows really well, with good choice of words
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Another emotional poem...
    Very enjoyable read...
    You know how to write...
    Brilliant job, another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well done
    The second stanza was my favorite
    the flow was excellent
    the rhyming wasn't forced
    the last line summed up the poem well
    it didn't leave the audience hanging
    The fourth stanza brought back harsh memories
    which was really cool in a way
    5/5
    kaila