Frustrated because I can't tell if it's real.
Please tell me this wasn't all a game.
Mad because I don't know how you feel.
I don't want to put out this flame.
Its like being stuck in a web of love.
I have this quote on my page
"Why is it that someone can shatter your heart and you still love them with all the little pieces"
^^thats very true love does a funny thing to us all, don't you agree?
Your objectives were strong like always. Great job. To me you are now known as a "strength writer" If you're not talking about being strong in actions, you are using strong emotions.
"Frustrated because I cant tell if its real"
> "cant" should be "can't"
"i can feel my heart of glass begining to crack"
>"begining" should be "beginning"
"Just tell me now, am i waisting my time?
Curious, is this just one of those twisted faits?"
> "waisting" should be "wasting"
> "faits" should be "fates"
"Baby face it its not just the distance"
> "its" should be "it's"
There are a few places where you need to capitalize your "I"'s.
Other than those mistakes, you're all good. Nice write.
Bleak without my other half
please just come back
Worried never again will i hear you laugh
i can feel my heart of glass begining to crack
^^^^When you are able to say that: please just come back, then you know it is real love.
If it wasn't you would not think twice about a man who has already kissed another girl.
Very good poem, you have put into words very well how you feel about this:)