Soo true...this is all most reasonable girls ask their guy for,but most of the time guys just either dont understand or they enjoy breaking hearts.You're really talented...this is another good poem I've read of yours.Keep it up!
This sounds like something my best friend needs to be telling her ex boyfriend who is just messing with her. Telling her he loves he, then telling other girls he loves them. What can i say...he's got her on a string.
The ones that tell you it will be forever either lie or know little about life yet.
Nothing lasts forever and although there are people who stay together their whole life long those are exceptions.....
Breaking up is not such a bad thing to do when you have grown apart, but to stay in a relationship for all the wrong reasons is so wrong...both parties will stay unhappy.
Great poem, as always:)
Never hold my hand
if you're going to break my heart
^^ i love this line. ppl think that "holding hands" means nothing these days. but to some, like me, its the lil things that matter, that make me get attached and when you get separated form things like that it feels as though your heart is breaking.. in short, you said all that in this very line. i love it! great job!
Wow, this one gave me goose bumps.
This one i have to say is my favorite. I love your message and the truth behind each word. This makes me want to show it to all my guy friends.
They think that the little lies don't hurt and it won't effect anyone....but they do and sometimes it hurts really bad.
5/5 well deserved
you are a great writer, once again a strength writer.
This sounds really familiar...hmm maybe I read it but never commented it. Anyway on to the poemâ€¦
"Never say your going to call,"
"Never say your not controlling,"
I liked the repetition here because you got what you wanted to say across nicely. The meaning behind your words were filled with an immense of power and strength showing youre done taking the BS and want him to man up. Im sure many could really relate with this because we have all come across a guy like that. The message was clear here which shows how guys and actually people in general say one thing but then do another. Its easy to say something but when the action actually takes place then that shows that person is trustworthy, Well said hun.
Nothing left to say but that I truly enjoyed this.