Comments : As the days gone by

  • 16 years ago

    by Feesha

    I really liked this one it was really good so good job love it

  • Very very good i love the feeling of this chill's down my spine.i love this keep up the great writing you are good at it:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    "Like the grief I am
    Like the tears I'll be "

    .. very hearfelt..

    "With words and lust I can write
    With the pain and illusions I can't define

    Too many broken promises I've kept
    Unwitting as I am of a future that could never be "
    loved the lines..

    beautiful poem... loved it

  • 15 years ago

    by neo

    A wonderful poem 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    I love how your words are so clear-cut..no illusions to prop the poem.Excellent flow.Good write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mishka

    This is like pure lonliness and sadness and yet it's written beautifully. I hope you're alright sweetheart.
    Very nicely written...
    5/5