I have to disagree with the other commenter. I believe that the structure has great potential and it is fullfilled.
Though, I do believe the lines are a bit short, they still have great emotion.
I liked when you only had 3 lines rhyming instead of one, but the 4 wasn't bad either. Just a bit more together.
The line that didn't rhyme kind of was like BOOM.

You did a wonderful job, great emotion , flow, and all the above.

Keepit up.
5.5

I like the flow and the rhymes a lot, short lines in the stanzas made the whole piece truly powerful and effective. I could feel the emotions while I was reading this, and I can relate to it in a way. \
Greatly written poem.
My favorite stanza is:

-That fate of the world,
Has burned out my flame,
Leaving in it's wake,
A heart that is maimed.-