Comments : Dear Tay

  • 9 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This is a really touching poem, i love little kids, they're so inocent and if you look closely you can learn so much from them.
    take care x

  • 9 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    This is a really good poem and i liked it a lot. You are a really good writter

  • 9 years ago

    by StandStill

    This made me wanna cry....beautiful. this little girl is blessed to have such a loving uncle! <3

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    OMG... I love this and I am sorry...

  • 9 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Oh, My Goodness.
    I started crying. This poem really touched and called out to me. I am truly happy to know that such a little girl has such a loving and caring Uncle like you. <=]
    I hope that if she reads this, she'll be able to understand. You're a strange character when it comes to writing but you're so full of emotion when you write. It blows me away.
    This was Wonderful and So full of emotion.
    I Literally Cried.
    You've Got a lot of talent. Keep it up.

    -Ally

  • 8 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Aww brang tears to my eyes, goodjob.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Whew...it's hard for the heart not to be crumpled by reading this. Real situations bring powerful poetry. A very sad situation for the little girl. But I think she has grown up strong now since this was nine years ago.