I take it that something bad has happened in a relationship in your life due to all the content of these poems. Believe I felt the exact same way about a week ago and somewhat still do but if you really are feeling this way, believe me when I say it will pass with time... maybe not everything but the feeling of wanting to just die so not to feel this way anymore, will. Great poem though, your pain and emotion shine through.... 5/5

This is one amazing poem. I feel like reading this poem is like reading my life, reading a story [poem] of what I go through every day of my life. A poem simply too great for words. The wording was excellent, and there's something about this poem. .I'm not exactly sure what, but something that makes it so incredibly great. a truly amaizng write. 5/5.

Oh My this was just so beautiful! I loved how each line flowed with such ease and beauty. Nothing seemed forced and I was left wanting more. Your emotions were real and struck me deep because I could wholeheartedly relate with everything you said. Well done, this is one of those poems that I will remember for a while.
*5/5*

Hmm u had a loads of pretty emotions here.. and it was sweet piece! i truly love the message of this poet.. its very inspiring and very enjoyable to read.. all the importand words seems really express it very well 5/5

This poem is marvellous...=)
it is really deep and emotional...
it is just so easy to relate to... even when you give your own heart to the person you love, that person might just throw it away... it's not fair to love without being loved...
your poem is great :)
*keep up*
isabel

Wow, wow... absolutely amazing piece...
Overwhelming sadness runs wild through every stanza, implanting into reader's mind. Whole poem is filled with excellently expressed emotions and it touched me deeply. I love the way you wrote it- straight to the point- because the whole piece sounds like it's written straight from the heart with such sincerity.
The flow is flawless from the beginning to the end.
Overall, fantastic love piece.
My favorite stanza is:

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And, I'm fighting back tears.
As I recall past years,
and everything I ever dreamt,
all including you.
And, only you.
everything about you -
i dream of, everynight;
just to, just to -
just to make me feel alright.-

Keep up!

Well, not many people can pull off a long poem, but yours was definately amazing. The feeling in this was so powerful and the flow fit just right. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

This poem is very heartfelt. my fav stanza was
I've proved them wrong.
I've given you my all,
fought for you, died for you-
from the inside out.
I've proven my feelings
a hundred times and more,
that come from deep within my soul;
something that once made me
completely whole.

i can rlly feel the emotion in this. great poem

This poem is very heartfelt. my fav stanza was
I've proved them wrong.
I've given you my all,
fought for you, died for you-
from the inside out.
I've proven my feelings
a hundred times and more,
that come from deep within my soul;
something that once made me
completely whole.

i can rlly feel the emotion in this. great poem