Comments : Innocent Footsteps

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This lifts confusion and depression to a new level... lol
    Brilliant piece... Honestly, I can find so many hidden emotions and thoughts in this (but you probably haven't had all that in mind when you wrote this) I think that this poem reflects differently on each person... I found some connection to my feelings at the moment...
    The imagery of whole poem is mind-blowing, fantastic and absolutely unique. There's no point to copy/paste my favorite and the most effective parts cause I would have to copy the whole piece...
    You have great talent!
    Keep writing!