Comments : Reflection

  • 10 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    WOW great poem i like the subject and the way you put it all together 5/5

    Noelle

  • 10 years ago

    by Kelvin Masi

    Its a good poem I like the way its writen, Keep it up!!

  • 10 years ago

    by mikaella

    I really like this! like alot it had great flow and kept me hooked til the end.

  • 10 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    I feel the same way sometimes

  • 10 years ago

    by Mia

    You asked me to be honest when commenting the poem you wrote and that is what I will be.
    It got me teary and deeply touched. It also made me read until the end, which only a little number of poems/writers can.
    Amazing job, honestly.

  • 10 years ago

    by she

    I totaly luv this!

  • 10 years ago

    by Adam Murphy

    I love it. ive been on this site for a long time, and this is the first thing ive ever added to my favorites. I COMPLETELY understand how you feel, great job

  • 10 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    At your age to express yourself the way you did makes me sad. i'm 26 it doesn't get any easier honey. Good work though.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kristi White

    "whenever i laugh
    i hear myself cry"
    Genius... I love that<3

  • 10 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    This is good, I thought the flow was a bit off, right in the begining, but the rest was awsome.

  • 10 years ago

    by HvN

    I would have to say this one is my favorite, it's full of emotion! I can definitley relate, great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lori

    This is good! Short and simple! I would have liked it a bit more if it didnt have as many "how"s ...but its still great.. the hows show your creativity so i'm def not gunna crush it because i love it! lol great job! >3

  • 10 years ago

    by Sora Lynn

    Awhh wow! i loved this poem! very detailed, yet sadd. but all and all it was great =]

  • 9 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Young or old we all have things we hide away in our hearts and minds. We can never know what someone else is going through. I have been surprised by some of the feelings hidden inside people i know. As they would be surprised by mine if i let my guard down. Ultimately, there comes a time when you have to decide whether to lock it away forever or let them out. I wish i could do the latter but its not easy to do. I can relate very much to your words.

  • 9 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I like it, I like the flow, and how it's set up.
    keep it up!
    5/5