WOW great poem i like the subject and the way you put it all together 5/5

Noelle

Its a good poem I like the way its writen, Keep it up!!

I really like this! like alot it had great flow and kept me hooked til the end.

I feel the same way sometimes

You asked me to be honest when commenting the poem you wrote and that is what I will be.
It got me teary and deeply touched. It also made me read until the end, which only a little number of poems/writers can.
Amazing job, honestly.

I totaly luv this!

I love it. ive been on this site for a long time, and this is the first thing ive ever added to my favorites. I COMPLETELY understand how you feel, great job

At your age to express yourself the way you did makes me sad. i'm 26 it doesn't get any easier honey. Good work though.

"whenever i laugh
i hear myself cry"
Genius... I love that<3

This is good, I thought the flow was a bit off, right in the begining, but the rest was awsome.

I would have to say this one is my favorite, it's full of emotion! I can definitley relate, great job!

This is good! Short and simple! I would have liked it a bit more if it didnt have as many "how"s ...but its still great.. the hows show your creativity so i'm def not gunna crush it because i love it! lol great job! >3

Awhh wow! i loved this poem! very detailed, yet sadd. but all and all it was great =]

Young or old we all have things we hide away in our hearts and minds. We can never know what someone else is going through. I have been surprised by some of the feelings hidden inside people i know. As they would be surprised by mine if i let my guard down. Ultimately, there comes a time when you have to decide whether to lock it away forever or let them out. I wish i could do the latter but its not easy to do. I can relate very much to your words.

I like it, I like the flow, and how it's set up.
keep it up!
5/5