You asked me to be honest when commenting the poem you wrote and that is what I will be.
It got me teary and deeply touched. It also made me read until the end, which only a little number of poems/writers can.
Amazing job, honestly.
This is good! Short and simple! I would have liked it a bit more if it didnt have as many "how"s ...but its still great.. the hows show your creativity so i'm def not gunna crush it because i love it! lol great job! >3
Young or old we all have things we hide away in our hearts and minds. We can never know what someone else is going through. I have been surprised by some of the feelings hidden inside people i know. As they would be surprised by mine if i let my guard down. Ultimately, there comes a time when you have to decide whether to lock it away forever or let them out. I wish i could do the latter but its not easy to do. I can relate very much to your words.