This is very powerful poem. I really like the way you wrote it- the tones of it are captivating and the rhythm that you created is really great, with interesting and original choice of words. Atmosphere of the whole piece keeps attention ant it is totally intense. I love the imagery, too. You mixed descriptions excellently.
Still, the poem is really good but it has a few mistakes in it- you repeated some words and this piece needs a couple of improvements.
All in all, greatly done.

Quite intense poem, filled with powerful and creative descriptions. Atmosphere is truly captivating from the beginning to the end.
The repetitions of "waiting" are effective and that created interesting flow in the third stanza, and the repetition of "help" in the fourth also.
Whole poem holds amount of greatly expressed emotions.
Overall, nice job!
5/5 from me

I really like this poem.. It's well written & beautifully penned 5/5 great job, keep it up