I like this poem a lot.. everyone feels used at one point, but the feeling isnt usually mutual.. I hope you can get make your problem better.

This is really good.
But hunny all love ends the same, In paiin.</3

Wow. I really enjoyed this! It had beautiful flow..my favourite line is the last one. Had an impact on the whole poem. Keep up your excellent work :] && thanks for the comments

Chrissie xx

Truthfully.. its GREAT!

[[chuNkie LoveS]]

This poem is great and very true keep up the good work i loved it!

This was so emotive, i loved it. Awesome Job!

Tiff

This reminds me oddly of my now current relationship :)
but the first think you learn is that it takes time. Most people assume that it's a few weeks, but it took me months to learn that I really loved him. :)

I love it.

that's all I can say, its amazing and I'm relating to it because if my relationship at the moment... idk

5/5

You described the hardships of young relationships effectively.
good job!

Amazing! Love it 5/5!

Ive been through that..i canrelate

But more than anything i guess
i just want you to be happy

Kayli,

These lines above are the essence of true love: wanting above else for the other to be happy. I am sure you will find someone that will love you dearly, because you are the kind of girl that is able to write lines like these...

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid