Comments : Memory

  • 16 years ago

    by Eclipse

    I'm not sure what to make of this.
    This is one of your poems that I look and don't understand whats happening. I don't like that....

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, wow...
    I'm impressed... this is truly unique and endlessly effective. Absolutely brilliant poem, excellently written. It has amazing, fastened flow. I like the short lines, they create powerful rhythm. Whole atmosphere of this piece is fantastic.