Unconscious Wish

by BlAcK RoSe   Jan 10, 2008


I did an undefenable thing.

I created my own prison.

I have to exist in it.

Maybe I had an wish to punish you.

An unconscious wish.

I know in the past.

I've caused you pain, and am sorry.

And I'll always be sorry until the day I die.

And i hate this pen I am holding because I should be holding you.

I hate this paper under my hand because it isn't you.

I even hate this letter, because it is not the whole truth.

Because the whole truth is so much more than a letter can say.

If you wanna hate me , go ahead.

If you wanna burn this letter, do it.

You could burn the whole world down.

You could tell me to go to hell, id go if you wanted me to.

And id send you this letter from there.

(From My so called life) I thought it was an amazing poem

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  • 10 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    And i hate this pen I am holding because I should be holding you.

    I hate this paper under my hand because it isn't you.
    That in itself deserves a five. the entire poem is well written dear, i loved it. The prison i put myself in.

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a very unique sad poem truly i loved it the way you said hating the pen because it replaces your loved one in which you want the most i can relate nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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