WOW tha's really good, in a sexy kind of way, haha keep it up Shanik

Amazing job with this one, darling. :]
it was short, but it got to the point - and flawlessly as well. :]]

keep it up

Wow thats good. i can really relate to this, lol.

--TheGothicAlbino

I dig this poem, come on now if your sex is off the kook like it sounds, then it will be hard for her to be just your friend. I wouldn't want to share the cock. But I like this and I can relate to this poem. Good stuff. She probably ran because she was sprung:)

Very good poem. Great wording. The flow was also good. I gave this poem a 5/5.