Comments : Saving This Soldier

  • 16 years ago

    by ShawdowDancer

    I like this poem its short but really good keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    this is good poem. However, it could be elaborated on. Maybe with emotions felt such as anger and frustration and commitment to his country. Alternatively its good as it is short and sweet, leaving the rest to the readers imagination.

    well done
    Michael