For once, I can honestly say I don't think there is any way to improve this way. Each time the rhythm seemed a bit off, I reread it and it was fine. Very, very well written and I love the word choice. 5/5.
That was the cutest poem i have ever read i loved it...it kinda reminded me about the way i feel for this guy who isnt ready for a relationship...but ya newho i realli enjoyed readin this poem it was amazing