Comments : Wait For You

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe a very sweet poem.
    and a beautiful write.
    the rhyme was perfect and the flow
    was almost flawless. :]
    a great write. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cassie

    I'd wait for you until I die.

    that is the most sweetest line in this poem
    i think its amazing last line always sends someone of thinking. xxxxx

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow that was filled of lovely words and it was so sweet! the message was actually powerful and very worded.. seems really sincere and perfectly well express 5/5

  • Good poem.
    It flowed well and the imagery was clear.
    Good job 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Aww that was soo cute. it sounds a little like middleschool love. "id wait for you untill i die" was the most touching part in it i think.
    5/5 !props!

  • 9 years ago

    by AnotherAries

    "My heart is yours to have and hold.
    You make me feel so good inside.
    I'd wait for you until I die" I think this part is so sweet...i love this poem!..=)5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Blissful

    I could relate with the emotions you describe here. There is a certain someone I thought of while reading this and I'm certain I would wait for them also.

    "I worked so hard to win your heart.
    But you had mine right from the start."
    ^so true for me .. well said.

    *5/5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Very relatable piece. I love the way you ended it (the last line's my fave) because it's important to leave a lasting impression on the reader, you know? Very sweet. Great job. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Idiosyncratic

    For once, I can honestly say I don't think there is any way to improve this way. Each time the rhythm seemed a bit off, I reread it and it was fine. Very, very well written and I love the word choice. 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by David

    Oh the love in this poem was fantastic, your description and word choice was amazing, full credit to you, this was a magic piece, you sure have talent.

    5/5 David

  • 9 years ago

    by islam

    Awsome soo Awsome i cant say more cuz if i'll I Won't Give u the right describtion
    Awsome 10/10

  • 9 years ago

    by chantelle

    That was the cutest poem i have ever read i loved it...it kinda reminded me about the way i feel for this guy who isnt ready for a relationship...but ya newho i realli enjoyed readin this poem it was amazing

  • 9 years ago

    by KATIE

    THIS POEM WAS GOOD. =]
    ALRIGHT IT WAS GREAT!

    NICE JOB!

  • 9 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful job
    this poem is amazing
    you've outdone yourself
    it relates close to home for me
    so I really really enjoyed it
    plz keep writing
    5/5
    kaila

  • 9 years ago

    by kati

    This is so beautiful =)

  • 9 years ago

    by frequent lover

    Wow hun if they don't wait i sure will
    I can totally feel this poem i love it
    *tear*

  • 9 years ago

    by haunted

    Awww, this is so sweet!!!!
    This made me have a warm feeling in my heart ... awwwwwwwww *infinity aww*
    *Cries*

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Great poem, theres so much emotion within the words i love it 5/5 :) keep up the good writing

  • 9 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww, this is a very sweet poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing. the flow was perfect also. i didnt see anthing wrong with this amazing piece. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Boy

    My favourite line

    My love for you is never changing.

    and then in the last ...

    I'd wait for you until I die.

    these two are realy relates to me... nice work carry on.