Used Soul For Sale

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Jan 13, 2008


A blank canvas lies within my inner being.
Untouched, not a single drop of ink is seen.
Out of all the others, you have chosen me,
To help at times of need.

Scribbling frantically, I'm your venting board.
Sounding off you hope for some miracle cure,
To the unanswered questions of an uneased heart,
Unknowingly erasing all the words I try to start.

Finally conclusions are reached, I've served my purpose.
Spirits now lifted, you look upon my worn out surface,
Without another thought you toss me to the cold floor.
Like some trash you'd rather ignore.

Now a recycled canvas, slightly used.
Placed on a shelf for the next round of abuse.
My soul lies in waiting for that fateful day,
When life has been cruel to you once again.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    This is quite close to being perfect, and that takes something! You are a great writer, Ill give you that.

    And I bow down in the dust of your dazzling words.

    Peace.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Perfecty and beautifully written!!! I really loved the vocabulary and voice of this poem. I think that emotion was really shown greatly and the way that the flow came naturally...PERFECT. The stanza I liked the best was definately the last one. Another great feature is the fact that you started off by grabbing my attention, and you gave a conclusion that just makes me wanna read more! Great Job 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by Dave

    WOW did you nail it there I my self have been in somewhat of a block lately and damn that put it to a tee thankl you for posting it and shareing it with everyone again exclent read thanks

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    *applause*
    the way you portrayed your story was really sad and heart-grabbing... your poem would absolutely make my friend cry.. she had the same experienced... anwyayz.. this is a great poem! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This is truly amazing. I like it from the beginning to the end. The emotions are expressed excellently, whole poem is filled with raw, overwhelming sadness and pain. I can relate to this piece in a way. Your metaphors are really interesting and good. All descriptions are so vivid, and the imagery simply sings sorrow from the beginning to the end.
    Fantastically written!
    5/5 from me

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