I really like it. It's got alot of imagery and emotion in it

5/5

Yes! I was trying to write a poem about exactly the same subject, and came out with a load of tosh. Yours is intense, the imagery is amazing and the vocabulary perfect. Awesome write, thanks. Sole. x

Wow...
This is truly amazing. I like it from the beginning to the end. The emotions are expressed excellently, whole poem is filled with raw, overwhelming sadness and pain. I can relate to this piece in a way. Your metaphors are really interesting and good. All descriptions are so vivid, and the imagery simply sings sorrow from the beginning to the end.
Fantastically written!
5/5 from me

*applause*
the way you portrayed your story was really sad and heart-grabbing... your poem would absolutely make my friend cry.. she had the same experienced... anwyayz.. this is a great poem! =]

WOW did you nail it there I my self have been in somewhat of a block lately and damn that put it to a tee thankl you for posting it and shareing it with everyone again exclent read thanks

Perfecty and beautifully written!!! I really loved the vocabulary and voice of this poem. I think that emotion was really shown greatly and the way that the flow came naturally...PERFECT. The stanza I liked the best was definately the last one. Another great feature is the fact that you started off by grabbing my attention, and you gave a conclusion that just makes me wanna read more! Great Job 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

This is quite close to being perfect, and that takes something! You are a great writer, Ill give you that.

And I bow down in the dust of your dazzling words.

Peace.