AMZING ADDING YOU TO FAVS

This is sad truly sad. this poem is excellent written from the heart. shows what you think and through all the explaination. this is a very sad poem. but one thing i know ya gotta do is forgive them. not for them but for yourself. this must have been a hard poem to write sorry.

This is a great poem. sry it had to be written with so much hurt...

Beautiful & touching..strong females like us don't die so easily. we are here to piss off people who can't stand us

I hate him, i hate him, I HATE HIM!!!!!!! u r sooooo beautiful, and sweet, and all around amazing!!!!! who could not want u!!!! its not ur fault an it never was!!!!! remember that!!! this poem is amazing, an i jus want u to kno tha ur always wanted, and dont give up!!! 1nc again... I HATE HIM!!!!!!!!!!

Awe that was sad.. but also very good.. i feel ur pain girl.. u arent the only one that was used.. send me a msg sometime.. again that was great!

~M@ry~

You aint unwanted, and what you have been through has made you a stronger person, your writing exp[resses what a kind caring person you are you have just been hurt more than you deserve to have been. things will get better xxxxxxxxxxxx

That is so sad! im so sorry that happend to you. i wish i could help but i dont know how. i will listen though. im a bisexual and i just met a wonderful guy. your poem really touched my soul. and i wouldnt mine being there for you! that should have never happend to you. you really are so beautiful. i hate peeps who abuse others.

You write some deep and great work yourself. I really felt this. It's beautiful and so much depth in feeling came out of it. 5/5

Wow this is honestly one of the best poems ive read in a long time it actually brought tears to my eyes which has never happened b4 uve definetly been added to my favs. keep up the good work and ill prolly email u u sound really cool

Aw, that was hard for me to read. That's so sad. My heart breaks for you. :(

But good job...

kudos

Wow. this almost got me into tears. I understand exactly where you are coming from on this.
although i think you should change the "b/c" to "because"
and
"my heart brocken"
it shoule be
"my heart broken"

just to let you know.

Very powerful!
5/5

Just amazing. don't ever believe that no one will want you. always have faith that there is someone out there that will love you for who you are

This poem is creepy, but tru, which kinda scares, cant stop reading it...!

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. I loved the feeling in it because like you, I used to be abused by my cousin I was younger. It was a scary part of my past. I used to think like you, that I would never find anyone to like me for me, not for what happened in the past. Anyway, I absolutely loved this. It had so much emotion in it. Although, I didn't really like the structure of it, maybe breaking it into stanzas or into one whole stanza, with the separate lines. I really loved it. Good job!! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

This is a perfect poem. Very real in pain and sadness.