You'

by ABrookeD   Jan 14, 2008


I need you,
To help me thorugh this pain
I need you,
To keep me feeling sane

You were the one,
Who helped me through it all
You were the one,
Who caught me when I'd fall

Without you,
Theres no point to this life
Without you,
I feel all torn up inside

All i can do is hope
And along with that i'll pray
Knowing the memories that we shared
Will in my heart, forever stay

Dedicated to: Dan S.

**I'm not sure about this one. I might have to edit some parts. If anyone has any ideas or advice on how to improve it, please let me know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem indeed and i don't see a reason to edit it. its so awesome

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    Sounds perfect to me, i wouldn't change a thing!!!