Comments : BROKEN*

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG this poem is amazing. I'm ttly adding it to my favorites.

    I spilled out my heart,
    Every feeling i felt, spoken,
    But you refused to hear my hurt,
    So here i am all alone..completely broken..

    ^^^ this stanza has a very strong meaning to it. very wise choice of wording. please keep writing and feel free to check out some of my work 5/5
    kat

  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    I loved this one. its so real i felt your pain so strongly. another beautifully sad poem
    well done