That was so beautiful. I had just left my class because of some embarissment and thats just what I was asking myself. Good job. 5/5

I dnt feel that im a poet just because i write poems or lines that rhyme. true poets are those who speak the truth and those who knw it. and it appears my fried you know both. by the way i love your poem it tells a part of everyones life.

Wow ... this is a good one... great job
I love how you wrote it in questions

Wow, that was great a very visual very discriptive poem, I enjoyed reading it thank you, and good luck finding someone that can do all that

This poem is amazing i just love it!!! thankyou for writing such an amazing piece!!

Love it