Ohmyboy! This is like amazing, darling. Completely amazing, you have no idea how flawless it is.

Perfect flow, perfect emotion, perfect everything.

Keep it up. xD

:]5/5

This is truly elegantly written, with so captivating tones. You expressed your emotions on a great way from the first to the last stanza. The flaw was flawless, and whole poem holds truly stunning beauty.
Wonderful love piece, so touching.

Keep up
5/5 from me

How you finish the puzzle,
That lies inside my heart,
i loved these two lines so much

keep it up 5/5