Dats a brilliant poem well done

I like the style of your writing, reminds me of mine. I don't like to ryhme in my poetry because I could never do it. Did once, but well, heh, lucky me. But I felt your emotion, I felt the pull. That is what really counts, good job.

Well done, i liked this one alot. Probably the best so far but then again i've only read 3. But awesome job, the flow was really good and emotion came out so easily. Nice write.

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Great poem!! nice rhyming too!! :):)

Makes me wanna cry..
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I really like this poem.
It has a lot of meaning and that's what I really like.
Great job, keep up the good work
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