My Dog

by Aussie   Jan 16, 2008


Rosey my pal
she fell into sleep
released from sauveur pain
gone, to a non-existing place

My dear guardian
stood between me and the black lagoon
even against 3 other dogs
thax for protecting, for so long

*my dog died. i'm not done*

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  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Interesting poem. keep it up. i would like to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww you must have been very close to your dog. I'm sorry it died. Awesome poem can't wait til you finish it. But it sounds like a winner so far. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Even if this unfinished poem so far is very
    touching. and the emotion is very deep. :] 5/5.