Comments : WHAT DO YOU SEE?

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    I liked it, it was good. it was kind of stream of conciousness type but overall very nice

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    What you see is also the answer and how you percieve things differently from others. "Wild running thoughts" ...That would be an excellent title for a poem. I think if you wrote a poem like that it would take you from a general topic to a poem that you could expand on your viewpoints more concrete.

  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    Ur not so bad yourself! I liked this one.