Alex, that was truly heartfelt. I am almost embarrased to say that my heart sank at the end, and a tear came to my eyes for you. I wish I could feel what happened for you, for real in my own life. Just one more time. Bravo.
YO! this is your best poem! oh my lord! you just gave me goosebumps... it's like a movie that it's thrilling... damn yo.. a simple story well told that gives readers to be eager to finish it! damn yo! the best .. this is gonna be one of my favorites! great job!
The beginning is adorable,
The middle is painful [as in I feel the heartbreak and disapointment]
The ending is just the fairytale everyone dreams of.
It's a simple story with beautiful twists.
An emotional journey and deep view of how the heart works.
It's breathtaking =)