My soulmate, my soldier

by just a poet   Jan 19, 2008


A flower fighting with all its might,
against the wind thats pushing past,
reminding of a love i knew,
the soldier i saw last.

a tree i saw standing tall,
reaching past, into the sky,
in it i see a lover of old,
but away my soldier did fly.

the ocean stretching so, so far,
to the end of the world its run,
like my lover that soldier of mine,
they have now both gone.

long ago i fell for him,
he won the war at heart,
but in the greater war, in real life,
he was taken from my by a flying dart.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    You know its the comparisson that really struck hard into my core it was utterly beautiful

    xoHSxo

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Aww... I love how it's both sad and sweet. I love it when a poem makes me have mixed feelings. It was really great! The flow and rhymes were good too.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce