Comments : Can This Be

  • 16 years ago

    by you will never forget me

    Errmm..I know how you feel..right when you think you can move on..the memories come back all too clearly..boo *thumbs down*..great write though! =]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Another beautifully penned poem, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    "Each day I wake from sleep
    Is this the day that I shall reap"

    My favorite line. I don't know, it just sends me this feeling which can't be explained. This whole poem does. Anyway, this ie excellent! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Thank you so much...your too kind...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    Mike this poem is kinda sad!
    I hope this isnt how you really feel =(

    But this is another great poem!

    5.5 yet again

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    This poem was very touching. very great writing style. 5/5 keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    Aww.

    I like it.

    It's a really great poem.

    :]

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Candy Rain

    Diz gd 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Wow very emotional and people can relate...like me Great job! I bet u write some mean songs.

  • 16 years ago

    by ourlilsecret

    Ohh..
    I Reallyy Liked This One...
    Great Jobb<3*
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Great poem! but i love all ur stuff, so whatev....lol. and ur not prone to being alone. im here!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by sara

    Good work I really like it keep it up 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by June

    I liked this poem ,one line that stood out for me was ...I can't live my dreams.....but its those dreams that keep us going so hold on to them.

  • 15 years ago

    by Unamed

    Aww!...really sad...its really short poem but it has a lot of emotion. Great Job!
    Aly

  • 15 years ago

    by girly

    Awwwwwwww

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Really good poem but Idon't understand the end. Maybe I'm just a simpleton haha. 5/5 anyway, Em x