The Beach

by Mike Martin   Jan 20, 2008


The beach laps the shore
Where I used to adore
The wind in your hair,
Like a fresh autum breeze
You made me buckle,
It was my choice
You would never insist,
You knew I couldn't resist
I walk the same beach now and again
Hoping to see the wind in your hair
Your attitude, with a flare,
It is empty now
no one in sight,
Do I really have this God given right,
My mind is a wander,
So, I will always ponder,
The walks on the beach
In hopes, it's you, that I reach.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Amazing. and yes, you do have that god given right, hunni!!!! xoxoxox

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Oooo i like this a lot, its so beautiful, but so sad... the writing is dantie... like you wrote the poem in the sand... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by penguinLex

    I liked it a lot XD but i think the layout of it all needs a bit of a work out.
    I loved the words though. Great Job!

    Lex

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor

    Awh, sad. But still loving. I know how you feel. Really well written. 5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A beautiful poem, reminds me of my walks on the beach, 5/5

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