Stephen... I love it of course.... Well said!

A very heartfelt poem full of emotion and desired love. The title was magnificent in itself and at first i wondered if the poem would be able to back it up, let me say that the poem most backed it up plus some.

From the poems of yours that i have read i must say that you are simply brilliant with words. I really do not see how you seem to be able and twist them to your will. You are an insperation. Never stop writing, your talent is to great to waste. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander

That was pretty great
it just seemed very real
but original at the same time
i loved it
5/5 :):)

Wow. I loved it.
5/5

So here it goes. Stephen, I really love your titles. This one is awesome as well. So lets get started..

First stanza: Well, not a boring opening but not the best.
I liked it though, quite simple with the original rhyme scheme.
Not bad there Mr. Lol. The feelings are kinda cliche in an adorable lovey dovey way...

Second stanza: Oh boy. I loved that first line. I really did. Your punctuation is used but not to the fullest again
I think that this issue is just me. Im a HUGE punctuation freak. Lol. But I still love your work.
Do not get me wrong now. Anyways, back to the poem. I also loved the second line.
I loved the : it had a hold on the way I read it. Pausing the continue reading. Get it right?
Either way loved it.

Third stanza: Aww. This one made me smile. It is such simple wording but it means a lot.
It expresses a feeling that not all are blessed with and in an amazing way.
I love it :]]

Fourth stanza: Oh boy, I love the two first lines and your punctuation is back in buisness.
But the dream thing is wonderful. Made me smile AGAIN. Then the next two lines continue on the beauty
of the whole peice. I love it. You set a certain tone and stick to it. The whole nightmare dream thing is
great..

Fifth stanza: This stanza was kind of confusing for me. The second line is what got me.
I mean it makes sense yet it doesn't. But the flow is smooth and your rhyme is still going
strong and not yet fading into the backgroud at all. A great thing by the way...

Sixth stanza: While I can relate to this one with the love interfering with your WHOLE life. For me,
it just did not fit in with the peice. I guess to mood kind of went to being leave I don't want you here.
But not completely it holds its relevance [sp] Hmm. Your flow is amazingly smooth though...

Seventh stanza: Aww. The sadness stays. I loved the first line though. Its beautiful.Your word choice
made an impact with this one. The word about, for me, kind of threw the peices rhyme off. This is just
my opinion though. Still a great stanza.

Eighth: Oh how sweet and what a perfect way to end the peice. Its flawless. Completely. Just wonderful.
I don't have any complaints. Lol.

Overall, this peice besides my little nit picking issues is amazing. Very heartfelt and the emotions expressed
were true. Great job sweetie. 5.5

Amber.

How I love it. And that title is just so perfect. I love the ending, it made me smile. Such a beautiful poem of love.
This really is amazing. keep it up! =]
--Viola

Your really good, puts my work to shame...lol.