Oww...very dark & scary! Love the imagery i get from reading it! im a fan of poems that rhyme hehe. good job!!!!

Keep it up -n- Take care!

Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. I saw the image in my head. You did a very good job with it! Keep it up, because you've got talent. 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Hey!

I really liked this poem. The flow was great and the rhymes were spot on. The overall effect was very powerful. You did a great job :)

The one suggestion/comment I would make is to change the word 'demented' as it was sort of distracting for me. I felt like it didn't really fit with the rest of the poem...

"You're sick and demented,
You should be ASHAMED."

It's great though. Keep it up!

Ally. x

Excellent poem, i think it was very emotional.

"I go towards the light,
But you grab me by my chains,"
- These lines are great and have great imagery attached to them.

xx
Taegan Emily

Wow very interested! its kinda filled of deep emotions and inspiring thougths. the message was very clear to understand and there are few lines that i can truly relate at the same time... powerful 5/5

Very powerful from the beginning to the end. You managed to create effective atmosphere in each stanza. The emotions are expressed on a great way in the whole piece, too.
My favorite stanza is:

- The room spins in circles,
As I try to catch my breath.
You think I'll finally give in,
That this will be my death.-
^^
So vivid and fantastically described.

The only thing I don't like are rhymes. I think that they could be less typical.
All in all, truly greatly done.
Keep up!
5/5

This was a great poem I liked the caps and I know what you mean I dont like being controlled nice poem 5/5 plz do my newest 4

Your poem is really awesome...
it's very deep and amazingly written...
I love the thought in it... not giving in...
because when you give in, you can never let go...
10 000/5 ? actually I can't, so 5/5, though it doesn't seem very fair...xD
*take care*
isabel

That was a very powerful poem. I truly enjoyed it. Your choice of words were great and you get the point across really well.

The room spins in circles,
As I try to catch my breath.
You think I'll finally give in,
That this will be my death.

I love this stanza... to me it just stood out and I loved the lines.
5/5

I really liked its images

nice rhyming

it's awesome

good luck

Its rele sad.........and alot of ppl go thro it! i have and its been hard but i had friends to help me thro it!!!! very good poem!!! keep it up!!!......5/5

<3 i love you silly

Wow i loved this poem. great job

From the title I can feel that this poem is great, and you proof it. Not only a great title but the content is also wonderful. Very emotional expression. Still 5/5 to me!!!

I love this poem you have the spice to write what you feel

This is a very good peom and very true... Simply Me Tianna

Hey whered you get the idea from im
wrote a letter to depression a while ago great

Love this poem.
such power and emotion, and its not often you come across a poem where someone defeats their sadness!!
well done

The emotion in this poem is one of beautiful sadness. It absolutely took my breath away. Sadly it seems that many in our world are becoming depressed. Rather it be for real reason or simply to get attention. It was a very good subject ot write a poem on. A truely magnificent, heart-stopping, amazing piece. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander

I liked the title, but the caps really threw me off. I hate caps. I really do. I know your trying to recognize her but yeah. Anyways, this was a great peice. It had plenty of emotion.

Your flow was smooth and your rhyme did not seem overly forced. Just a tad bit. I think that it was great other than the issues I pointed out. So great job.

Amber.

Amazing poem ^^ Nightmarechild is an amazing poet too ^^ The simplicity of this poem really made the poem stand out more than most others because its differnt ^^ great work 11111111111111/5 =P mwah xxx