Comments : Displays of affection

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    "i love the way you seduce me
    and the way i always end up on top
    I'm screaming no but eventually
    I'm screaming no, don't stop!"

    This is probably my favorite part of the poem but it was hard to pick i love the entire piece!
    5.5

    And the ending was so very cute =)