A very beautiful write. this piece is filled with such passion, which I admire. I really like this poem and the the structure was very good. Your flow was excellent and this poem was very well written and very well thought out. :] The ending was perfect [mt favorite part] :] 5/5.

Aww thats so going in my favs... makin the fairy tale world part of ur own nice write great imagination and amazing poem! keep it up! 5/5 always
Kate~LSB23