Comments : No Way Out

  • 9 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! So very twisted.... :) The flow and rhyme of this piece are excellent. The first stanza, i thought the words were put just so that it sounded a little forced, but the rest of the piece was very well done.
    *ME*

  • 9 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its insanely vivid with great detail and emotion. I love how with a simple rhyme scheme its amazing well kept together. It flows so well.

  • 9 years ago

    by December

    Oh, so nice :D

  • 9 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Omg great poem! the flow and rhyme is amazing! u did a great job on it! 5/5
    keep up the great work hun!
    x o x o

  • 9 years ago

    by Sam Dent

    Wow thats amazing....i really liked it...u got some talent keep it up....by the way thanks for da comment on my poems.....5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love it. The details, your choice of words...everything.
    =)

  • 9 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very nicely written piece. The second I read the first stanza I knew I just HAD to read the rest! The beginning was amazing. Your choice of words were nice and you flow in the beginning and end were really good. A little rocky in the middle, but still an outstanding poem! You're an amazing poet and your work is too amazing for words! :]

    "I can't describe this feeling,
    It's a never-ending ache
    My innocence is peeling,
    For made clear is my mistake"

    ^My favorite lines! :]
    definitely 5/5!

  • 9 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Great work on this, the emotion was clear and heartfelt. You powerfully described this hard bittersweet situation.
    I loved the ending, too, specially the last line :).
    Keep writing!5/5
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 9 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Loved this write...you really made clear the emotion you were trying to get across in the poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle

    Awesome poem =]
    so much emotion is felt
    and so much angry lovee
    no girl should be in a relationship where she is hit.. if he hits u once.. u might love him but jus leavee!
    5/5 amazing job

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael

    Nice. great poem. flows really well =).

  • 9 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow. this is really good.

  • 9 years ago

    by DevilsAngel

    Nice poem....i really like it

  • 9 years ago

    by issues

    Very emotional sad but sometimes its true. Keep up the great work

  • 9 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good poem, Had me intrigued and couldn't stop reading

  • 9 years ago

    by Forever Broken

    OMG!!!!! I'm so glad you commented my poem so that I could find this one that you've written. It's really awesome!!! The feeling and the flow just pieced it together so nicely. Great choice of words. You have a lot of talent. PLEASE keep writing and dont ever let anyone put your poetry down. You have a gift and you should always write for yoursefl, not for other people. 5/5
    your friend
    kat

  • 9 years ago

    by NICOLE

    Hey i really liked this alot you know how to writ so well i hope you keep this up you really should because you know what you are saying

  • 9 years ago

    by Lindsay

    This was an amazing peice. Such simple wording makes it absolutely wonderful.

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarang

    Wow...
    An excellent poem!
    I love it!

  • 9 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Excellent use of imagery and great passion in this 1.
    loved it =D
    5/5