Comments : When I Close My Eyes

  • Nice poem i guess you base your poems about life..same with me great job imma rate it a 5/5 =] lol keep it up hope to read more

  • 16 years ago

    by briana

    Nice poem i feel the same way i still ask myself why? all the time keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    Nice piece! I love this:

    I have no idea why it is I cry
    And every night I ask the question why

  • 16 years ago

    by CEE CEE

    Wow I love it I can feel it. It crazy because for 2 straight years when I was in my room alone I would cry and I never knew why. I would ask myself is it becuz I was in a relationship that goin down but no they were different tears I was hurting inside I knew that the only thing I didn't know was why. So I love your poem I understand it and it was beautifully written. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is excellent, it plays on peoples emotions by letting them know how you feel =]
    I cant say i fully understand what you mean coz i have the opposite problem

    Great job this poem has a good flow
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Again you rhymed in some place but not in others which just kills the flow. You should be consistent .. either ryhme all over or not at all. I liked how you opened it because it kept my interesting but I lost interest as the poem progressed ... experiment with some new words and liven your poetry. All in all good job *4/5*